英検準1級 二次試験 四コマ漫画のナレーション
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One day, a man and his wife were at a property that they owned.
The man was cutting weed, and his wife was picking up trash.
That is to say it was a wasted land, so they thought that “we should find a better way to use this land.”
The next day some children were playing soccer on the road.
Then, a car passed by and a woman in the car warned them not to play soccer on the road.
The man who stood by and watched this came up with a good idea.
The next week they transformed the wasted land into as Play Space.
In other words, they made a park for children.
They hoped that many children would play here.
The following month children who played baseball there were scold by a neighbor.
The man asked her why she scold the children.
She said to him “A ball which the children hit broke a window in her house.”h.
That is to say it was a wasted land, so they thought that “we should find a better way to use this land.”
The next day some children were playing soccer on the road.
Then, a car passed by and a woman in the car warned them not to play soccer on the road.
The man who stood by and watched this came up with a good idea.
The next week they transformed the wasted land into as Play Space.
In other words, they made a park for children.
They hoped that many children would play here.
The following month children who played baseball there were scold by a neighbor.
The man asked her why she scold the children.
She said to him “A ball which the children hit broke a window in her house.”
wasted landはwaste landの方が良いです。
最後が面白くないですね。
The neighbor complained to the owner of the land, saying kids broke a window. She further said that you should prohibit ball games. The man was really upset to hear that.
こんな感じでしょうか。
この問題は覚えています。
私が受験したときの面接カードでした(笑い)。
僕も最後がしまらないなーと思っていました。
こうすればいいんですね。
まだ中2なので語彙力があまりないので…
わざわざありがとうございました
頑張ります。
wasted landはwaste landの方が良いです。
最後が面白くないですね。
The neighbor complained to the owner of the land, saying kids broke a window. She further said that you should prohibit ball games. The man was really upset to hear that.
こんな感じでしょうか。
この問題は覚えています。
私が受験したときの面接カードでした(笑い)。
僕も最後がしまらないなーと思っていました。
こうすればいいんですね。
まだ中2なので語彙力があまりないので…
わざわざありがとうございました
頑張ります。